That was a good poem! I enjoyed it though I'm late to respond.
Here is one of mine.
Once Late at Night
In the deep hour of delight
In the blackness I seen
A wee bit of white.
All over in the sky
I found my eye
Attentive on the glory of God
I saw chapter nineteen
And verse one
Out of the book of Psalm.
It was one starry world,
The universe long,
Long and long
Like life is everlasting goes
On, on and on.
I saw God when I looked
On a starry night I was hooked.
Open your eyes into
The light in the night,
Keep your eyes awake children
Use your hearts
Look out at all the stars
With your eyes leaping away.
The stars have been spread
Like what I have read
Then may we be seen tonight,
I'll see me in the starlight.